Pourriez vous m'aider à corriger mon texte d'anglais que j'ai écrit. Je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes c'est pour cela que je vous le demande.
Le voilà:
We will reflect on the subject: Are children often disillusioned by adults? I think there are two sorts of disillusionment. The first is when an adult makes something, which children wouldn’t like. For example: in Laura’s situation. She tells her mother the accident that she has just seen and she asks her to postpone or cancel the party. Her mother refuses and Laura feels that her mother can’t understand her. There are a lot of situations where the children are disillusioned by adults. I think it is because children and adults think differently. Children think we can do what we want and adults know the reality: it is impossible.
The second situation is when adults say something, which doesn’t please children. For example: Laura’s may mother says that people like her neighbour, who are poor don’t expect sacrifices from them. She considers them like animals and it doesn’t please Laura. I think attitudes, which may disappoint children most are when parents prevent their children from doing, what they wish a lot. Children can’t understand that they can’t have, what they want, when they want. Children and adults have different mind that’s why children are often disillusioned by adults.